Nice presentation. May want to practice speaking in a more “natural” tone. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
Wade Mackey says
Nice presentation. May want to practice speaking in a more “natural” tone. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
Mauchel Barthelemy says
Thanks for your constructive criticism professor. I agree with your suggestions.