Nice work. I liked how you addressed right up front your shift in focus. One area to watch yourself is in shifting between plural and singular. At certain points in the presentation you reference “we” found something. Later you used “I”. Just want to be consistent. Nice findings and analysis.
Nice work. I liked how you addressed right up front your shift in focus. One area to watch yourself is in shifting between plural and singular. At certain points in the presentation you reference “we” found something. Later you used “I”. Just want to be consistent. Nice findings and analysis.