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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice presentation. Executive summary was short and to the point. Table was great as it grabs the readers attention.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, consider pulling a shortened version of the table near the top of the document. Also consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your…[Read more]
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice Presentation. For Executive Summary, I liked the length. This was just right. Consider breaking paragraphs up, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, pull the table to the front of the document. Consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, pull the tables earlier in the text. Consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice work on the presentation. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice work with the presentation. For Executive Summary, I liked the use of tables but consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the…[Read more]
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice job on the presentation. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice work on the presentation. Equally nice job on the Executive summary with key findings up front.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice presentation. May want to practice speaking in a more “natural” tone. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for…[Read more]
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Very nice presentation. Nice follow-up with remediation. In the executive summary, consider breaking up the intro paragraph and moving the table nearer to the front of the document. Executives will scan a document the table would grab their attention.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.
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Wade Mackey posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Nice presentation. Missing Executive summary.
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Wade Mackey wrote a new post on the site ITACS 5211: Introduction to Ethical Hacking 7 years, 10 months ago
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Wade Mackey wrote a new post on the site ITACS 5211: Introduction to Ethical Hacking 7 years, 11 months ago
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Wade Mackey wrote a new post on the site ITACS 5211: Introduction to Ethical Hacking 7 years, 11 months ago
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Wade Mackey commented on the post, Reconnaissance Report: Trillium Technologies Inc., on the site 7 years, 12 months ago
Very Nice Work. For future reference, three to five minutes is fine, but thank you for the effort you put in. Also, I can see the improvement from last semester.
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Wade Mackey commented on the post, Aramark Reconnaissance Assignment, on the site 7 years, 12 months ago
Nice work. Would like to see a little more outside of the google hacking piece.
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Wade Mackey commented on the post, Recon on Beneficial Bank, on the site 7 years, 12 months ago
Nice work. Liked how you followed up with the outsourcer.
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Wade Mackey commented on the post, Recon on Hahnemann University Hospital, on the site 7 years, 12 months ago
Nice work. Liked the focus on family and friends as well as the social engineering angle.
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