Wade Mackey

Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, consider pulling a shortened version of the table near the top of the document. Also consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your…[Read more]

Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, pull the table to the front of the document. Consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.

Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, pull the tables earlier in the text. Consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.

Nice work on the presentation. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.

Nice work with the presentation. For Executive Summary, I liked the use of tables but consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the…[Read more]

Nice job on the presentation. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.

Nice work on the presentation. Equally nice job on the Executive summary with key findings up front.

Nice presentation. May want to practice speaking in a more “natural” tone. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for…[Read more]

Very nice presentation. Nice follow-up with remediation. In the executive summary, consider breaking up the intro paragraph and moving the table nearer to the front of the document. Executives will scan a document the table would grab their attention.

Nice presentation. For Executive Summary, consider shortening paragraphs, use of bullet lists, etc… to make it easier for a manager or executive to skim through. They will rarely take the time to read deep in to long paragraphs. This does not affect your grade, just a helpful hint for the future.

Nice presentation. Missing Executive summary.

Very Nice Work. For future reference, three to five minutes is fine, but thank you for the effort you put in. Also, I can see the improvement from last semester.

Nice work. Would like to see a little more outside of the google hacking piece.

Nice work. Liked how you followed up with the outsourcer.

Nice work. Liked the focus on family and friends as well as the social engineering angle.

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Nice work. I liked how you addressed right up front your shift in focus. One area to watch yourself is in shifting between plural and singular. At certain points in the presentation you reference “we” found something. Later you used “I”. Just want to be consistent. Nice findings and analysis.